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Journal 14
Feedback helps us to adjust, learn and grow. Now that you’ve gotten feedback on your paper, where do you need to improve? Write two paragraphs discussing what you think you need to improve on.
Journal 14 Answer
Feedback is one of the most important tools for writing academic papers. Applying feedback from mentors helps one to improve their work. It also builds the skill of the individual by becoming more open to improvement and critical opinion towards their writing. The feedback which I received mostly in my papers is proofreading my work, especially on grammar. I needed to improve my knowledge of making complex sentences and transitioning them to become more cohesive.